If you saw my last post, you'll know I'm going through my completed books and I have realized something. The first book needs work. A lot of work. As I've been reading, I've found that the story and writing gets better with each book.
Below is a synopsis for my second one called "In My Dreams". While I do think this book is better than the first, it still needs work. I think the ending is a bit abrupt. Maybe it needs an epilogue. Still, read the synopsis below and let me know what you think. Would you read this book?
In My Dreams
Grace's life takes a sudden turn when she finds her fiancé cheating on her. Soon after, the dreams start. Her friends tease her about her dream man until one fateful evening when she sees him while she's awake. A crowded bar, the lights dimmed but she knows it's him. He's here and he's come for her.
The path they take is full of blood and danger. Will he keep her safe from others? Or more importantly, himself?
Tuesday, March 31, 2015
Sunday, March 29, 2015
Books, blurbs and ideas.. Oh my
In the coming days, weeks, months? I'm going to post stuff here. I'll write up a synopsis for each of my completed books and possibly ideas for covers or ask for beta readers and all sorts of tips.
I ask you the readers to share your opinions of the synopsis I provide. Please give feedback. Is this a book you'd read?
Without further ado, I give you my first try at a synopsis from my book titled "Not Alone". What do you think?
Not Alone synopsis
While on vacation, she falls in love with a house. It's a steal. A deal that seems too good to be true. Soon, she finds that the house is not as empty as she thought. Disembodied voices, brushes of her hair and a touch on her shoulder all make her wonder if she's losing her mind. Then she meets the other resident and knows the deal really was too good to be true.
She's not alone. He's something she hasn't encountered before. Can they coexist? Or will the past pull them apart?
I ask you the readers to share your opinions of the synopsis I provide. Please give feedback. Is this a book you'd read?
Without further ado, I give you my first try at a synopsis from my book titled "Not Alone". What do you think?
Not Alone synopsis
While on vacation, she falls in love with a house. It's a steal. A deal that seems too good to be true. Soon, she finds that the house is not as empty as she thought. Disembodied voices, brushes of her hair and a touch on her shoulder all make her wonder if she's losing her mind. Then she meets the other resident and knows the deal really was too good to be true.
She's not alone. He's something she hasn't encountered before. Can they coexist? Or will the past pull them apart?
Saturday, March 14, 2015
Dream time!
I haven't shared a dream here in a while so here's the latest one I had last Thursday night.
Last night, I dreamed that everybody in the world could
suddenly remember everything about their past lives. Every detail,
every life they ever lived was fresh in their minds. It caused
issues with a lot of people.
I was upset about one of my past lives. In
it, I was a girl about 10 years old and the setting reminded me of Little House
on the Prairie with the houses and dresses. I was wearing a dusty
rose dress and a bonnet. I was mad because my aunt (she was also
my current Aunt) promised to show me how to make pinafores but she kept delaying
and coming up with excuses as to why she hadn’t shown me yet. Side
note, I didn’t know what pinafores were until I googled it this morning.
Weird. Anyways, I decided to go to my aunt’s house and make
her show me. I was tired of waiting. To get to her
house, I had to walk along the woods. There was a ditch on one
side of me and the trees on the other side with a river in the ditch.
I tripped and fell down the ditch and into the river, then
drowned.
In my current life, I was sitting around the table with
Mom and two of my Facebook friends, Sharon and Kathy S. Mom was
asking why my Aunt Kathy wasn’t at the table with her and I explained that I was
too mad at her and told them the past life with me drowning. Mom
told me to let it go already because she wanted to see her sister.
Sharon agreed with me and said I had the right to be mad.
Kathy S. agreed with my mom.
An argument started about who was right and who was
wrong and I woke up in the middle of the argument
Tuesday, March 3, 2015
A plea...
I've seen a lot of good things happen because of Gofundme webpage. I've seen miracles happen because of it. I've also seen some greedy people post crap on the page.
But let me tell you that this one isn't crap. It's not some fake thing with some person only looking for money because they're greedy. This one is different. This is my uncle.
He has had health issues for many years and hasn't work in a long time because of it. Now, he needs help more than ever. I ask everybody who reads this to please donate to my uncle. He needs help. Spread the word. Get more eyes on it. Help him. Please.
http://www.gofundme.com/meybzc
But let me tell you that this one isn't crap. It's not some fake thing with some person only looking for money because they're greedy. This one is different. This is my uncle.
He has had health issues for many years and hasn't work in a long time because of it. Now, he needs help more than ever. I ask everybody who reads this to please donate to my uncle. He needs help. Spread the word. Get more eyes on it. Help him. Please.
http://www.gofundme.com/meybzc
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